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I have a couple of suggestions. I have been looking for a job for 2 years and written many resumes. >>
uhhh........Anyway! Here's my criticism. Hey, you asked for it!
Put Computer Consultant higher up on the list; certainly higher than "basketball scorekeeper". Yes I know it's going chronologically, but still...
There's a lot of empty space in the entire resume. Write a little bit more about your skills with computers; not just "Windows 98". My mom can use Windows 98.
Lose the boxed titles on the left
Overall, it just seems that things aren't organized very well. Lots of empty space, and it doesn't flow very well. Now of course, don't take this criticism personally. Here's a link to my
resume if you'd like an example of how my school teaches us to do it. Also, check out my school's career services website
here for all kinds of good tips on resume preparation and examples. Good luck with the job search!